14etan's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[oove] See the Sun]

dude dood mate chap wever

ok ok ok i have this sick idea for this song when it starts to pick up amd the girl sings see the sun have a male rapper come in with vocals like
see the sun rising over head with its golden shine see the sun a new day dawns we all work as pawns see the sun clouds blot it out again it shines through
eh eh eh know what im saying?

broove responds:

:D That might actually work.
Nice ideas, man.

[K-Board ROCKZ!]

dude

the tune itself is freakin sick man but whatever you recorded with is what realy ruined it for me. find somthing better to record with or plug an electric piano directly into the computer well good alover but find sumtin to record with peace man

Faires responds:

THX man!! That means a lot to me!!
Jepp...I know...I record with ma (REALLY FUCK UPPED..) digi-cam...jeah I 'll improve my tecnics of recordin' soon , man!!

THX for the tipps!!

[GenaHzO - Stars [WiP]]

nice man

only complaints are the drum seems a bit off beat by just a tad idk it might just be me um the melody gets a little tired after a while so work on timing of your melody transition. also the piano thing i would've maade the intro so it goes in to the main melody. the outro should be different than the intro. other than that its a pretty solid songs you just need a little polish here and their. keep workin man go go go!

GenaHzO responds:

yea , thank you

its still a work in progress, so im trying to polish it up ike u said, but i have like 3 works in prgress lol, so thanks =]

[Popcorn [Hardstyle Remix]]

no offense

biggest problem is that its very boring. try mixing up the pattern or try some soft synths along with the lead like brando said get a bass with some boom to i after the second repetition of the intro melody ad in the bass, dont forget to have a rythm instrument also check out some of my stuff although brando's here is a million times better but either way only look at the 09 stuff or your ears will bleed.

[Deliver]

awwwwwwwww sit man

lyrics ill give it a try

from the the gates of hell open your arms wide
the doom you spelt yourself awakes inside
the burning prison forged from your own hate
swing wide now you accursed unearthly gate

Wait here now now and see
wait here now for your destiny
all the wretched souls you see in dismay
the deliverer now must save

deliver us from these demons
deliver us hear our cries
deliver us from these creetons (idk the spelling)
hear our pain it reaches the skies

swirling pool of agony
tell me were's the unity?
shall we burn here forever
FOREVER AND AN ETERNITY!
good song man my friend compares ur stuff to that of metallica i love most ur stuff this is def some of your best stuff def ad vocals idkare if they are mine or not JUST ADD VOCALS!!!!!!!!!!

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

WoW, thats pretty awesome.
Thanks for the kind words as well!
Glad you dig the tunes! Thanks for all the support!\m/

[Mega Man 2 - Horror (Wily 2)]

the build up man

the build up seemed to long for a 3 minute song u know and the main part seemed to not exist it was like build up-outro u know what im saying? i couldn't realy fund were the main melodie of the song was.

saintedix responds:

Well, the fact of the matter is, the original song doesn't have a main theme. Like I said in the description, the original is simply one set of chords and bassline which moves up one key each time. I really didn't want to just fabricate a theme, so I tried to do what I could with the original. Thanks for the response!

[Music Speed Run!]

pretty good

nice man nice the onlly thing is turn down the main pattern its a little harsh on the ears if you know what im saying

Lalalo14 responds:

thx :)
Yeah I know.. Gonna turn it down a little and make it softer :P

[Pattern of Music]

let me gess

garage band right? well its okay some parts of the melody go realy off the beat and change up the drums check out some of my stuff i only use g band

Pattern-of-Music responds:

yep, but i don't like the loops...

[ParagonX9 - Chaoz Fantasy]

i love ur music

parogon your stuff is some of the best on newgrounds and proabably the queen of the techno on newgrounds but i was lookin through your collection and realized you dont have an "epic" song which i mean as in huge build up then just pure amazing then sudden end and the song to be long but what am i doing i should be reviewing this song not your whole collection now i love the main blips they remind me strongly of bubbles for some reason i give you a nine for the whole song and as one of the best artists on newgrounds i challenge you to make a song thaat will shake the very boundaries of what a genre is i know you can make that happen and so far i have not been able to find an artist with any songs that break the genre barrier but i see your stuff and i think that you may very well be able to do this.

[~EnV~Heaven Rd. 3]

dood

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