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great and crazy

def your best work. great transition in to the main melody, love the bass and the fade in and out near the end of the song, great drums. cool cool so on and so forth peace out

Dj-Fanta5t1c responds:

this si totally my favorite work too. I think even though its not industrial, it shows off my music ability better than any other song i have.

aww sit man

this is what i call C R A Z Y man. i love that you tried a different style and you nailed it man. nice blend, i love the effects that come in over all great.

Dj-Fanta5t1c responds:

thank you!

wat the

crap is this idiot talking about i love crunchy, go heavy man i woulda given you a 8 but i felt that you werent completly into it, idk man it seems like its not the best you could do.

Dj-Fanta5t1c responds:

yea i got lazy.

hello again

hey remember me? well any way nice song love the drums, although u may want to fix the bass at some points, othe then that i love it man

Dj-Fanta5t1c responds:

thanks bro

dude dood mate chap wever

ok ok ok i have this sick idea for this song when it starts to pick up amd the girl sings see the sun have a male rapper come in with vocals like
see the sun rising over head with its golden shine see the sun a new day dawns we all work as pawns see the sun clouds blot it out again it shines through
eh eh eh know what im saying?

broove responds:

:D That might actually work.
Nice ideas, man.

dude

the tune itself is freakin sick man but whatever you recorded with is what realy ruined it for me. find somthing better to record with or plug an electric piano directly into the computer well good alover but find sumtin to record with peace man

Faires responds:

THX man!! That means a lot to me!!
Jepp...I know...I record with ma (REALLY FUCK UPPED..) digi-cam...jeah I 'll improve my tecnics of recordin' soon , man!!

THX for the tipps!!

nice man

only complaints are the drum seems a bit off beat by just a tad idk it might just be me um the melody gets a little tired after a while so work on timing of your melody transition. also the piano thing i would've maade the intro so it goes in to the main melody. the outro should be different than the intro. other than that its a pretty solid songs you just need a little polish here and their. keep workin man go go go!

GenaHzO responds:

yea , thank you

its still a work in progress, so im trying to polish it up ike u said, but i have like 3 works in prgress lol, so thanks =]

awwwwwwwww sit man

lyrics ill give it a try

from the the gates of hell open your arms wide
the doom you spelt yourself awakes inside
the burning prison forged from your own hate
swing wide now you accursed unearthly gate

Wait here now now and see
wait here now for your destiny
all the wretched souls you see in dismay
the deliverer now must save

deliver us from these demons
deliver us hear our cries
deliver us from these creetons (idk the spelling)
hear our pain it reaches the skies

swirling pool of agony
tell me were's the unity?
shall we burn here forever
FOREVER AND AN ETERNITY!
good song man my friend compares ur stuff to that of metallica i love most ur stuff this is def some of your best stuff def ad vocals idkare if they are mine or not JUST ADD VOCALS!!!!!!!!!!

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

WoW, thats pretty awesome.
Thanks for the kind words as well!
Glad you dig the tunes! Thanks for all the support!\m/

the build up man

the build up seemed to long for a 3 minute song u know and the main part seemed to not exist it was like build up-outro u know what im saying? i couldn't realy fund were the main melodie of the song was.

saintedix responds:

Well, the fact of the matter is, the original song doesn't have a main theme. Like I said in the description, the original is simply one set of chords and bassline which moves up one key each time. I really didn't want to just fabricate a theme, so I tried to do what I could with the original. Thanks for the response!

pretty good

nice man nice the onlly thing is turn down the main pattern its a little harsh on the ears if you know what im saying

Lalalo14 responds:

thx :)
Yeah I know.. Gonna turn it down a little and make it softer :P

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